Thursday, July 29, 2010

run of the mill

WoaH!
the Air is hoT!
I can See loTs of biRds.
the grass Is exTremely grEen.
lOts of Nice flowers.
Tons of Happy pEople.
Some of Us get icecReam For a treAt.
i paCkEd a SandwicH tO eat at the park.
it was a yUmmy Lunch.
Dad NOTiced a BEautiful sail bOat on the Vast sEa.
i Really LOve jump rOping on the blacK top.
SummEr is my favorite season and i hope it never enDs.









1 comment:

  1. What is trite on the surface should not be overlooked. I seriously love this one. Like seriously. I get it. The poem seems like a trite kind of poem about a beautiful day, but there is a hidden message. And so the cycle continues. Brilliant.

    ReplyDelete